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Update 8/1/2011
Based on what I have figured out from reading between the lines on a variety of blogs and forums, it seems like the best strategy is to write a sequel before putting Teleporter Girl for sale up on Amazon.
So here is the start to the sequel. It doesn’t have a title yet, but hopefully something catchy and Google-search friendly will occur to me before the story is done. This story starts about a week after the conclusion of the first story. One of the biggest changes I’m making is switching from the first-person style of the first story to a third person style. I have a couple of reasons for this change. First, I don’t think any single character will be present in all the scenes I can already envision including in this story. Second, I want to explore what is going on in the head of more than one character.
One of the things I hate about a lot of stories about people with superhuman abilities is that the authors are exceedingly spare with utilizing the special gifts. Frequently, that’s the whole reason I am attracted to a story and then once you start reading it seems like you wait and wait and wait for the abilities to ever show up. In this story, their abilities are an integral part of the girls and most of them have had them as long as they can remember, so they are quite comfortable using them. While I won’t promise a big action sequence in every chapter, I think their abilities will be on display a lot.
If you would like to read what I have written so far, click here.
Since I can’t post this chapter by chapter to fanfiction.net like I have done with my other stories, I would really appreciate any feedback you would like to provide, if you chose to read this story. Either leave a comment or drop me an email at:
e-mail: duaneaa@gmail.com
Thanks, Duane
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